Notes on Sinking

by Clay Shirky
Background Painting by Peter Selgin


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A         rk and stormy night. The ship is rolling with the waves, the rain pounding down int

    she, bent like a Degas bather, removes her

                                                   turns slowly to face h

                        isses his way down h
          She
  in  

        and         his

Suddenly the door flies open, the boatswain leaning into the darkened cabin, a lantern swinging crazily in his hand.

"Captain", he says, "there's been an explosion in the engine room. We're shipping water!"

The Captain, sitting up in bed, looking through the open door.

"Shit" she says.

Harriet peered at the screen.


"You made this for me?"


"What is it?"

Down in the engine room, a scene of almost indescribable chaos, the Captain surveys the damage.

There has been an explosion in the stoke hole of one of the steam engines, tearing a hole below the water line. The extent of the damage is almost impossible to determine, because the engine which exploded has filled the room with coal dust and live steam.

Two of the crew were scalded to death almost instantly, a third is still missing.

The first mate comes down the hatch into the gloom. Before he is halfway down the stairs, the Captain stops him. "All hands on deck" she says.

"We're going down" she says.

She
told
me
she
loves
only
me.
He hears the piercing sound of sirens.

Although groggy at first, when he realizes that they are actually being summoned to the lifeboats, he is suddenly awake, a dying man offered one last chance.

He slips the valise out from under the bed, snaps it open, begins to gather his things. Passport and visa, a packet of letters, a school tie with its gold tie tack, an envelope fat with currency. He starts to close it, pauses, and throws in a pair of heavy silver candlesticks from the dresser.

Snatching up a shoe, he beats at the heavy glass of the portal until it cracks, then breaks, and before he has time to think twice, the valise is through the window and into the open ocean.

The splash is inaudible in the noise of the chaos above.

As he turns to the door, he wonders if they will try to arrest him on the lifeboat, or wait until they are ashore.

A
B
She
told
me
she
loves
me
only.
I wrote this story for Harriet.

I hope that she likes it.

boat people

term applied to people who escape political oppression by going to sea in makeshift boats.

Most recently, it has described

Harriet asks

"Why are you always late?"

Harriet asks

"What do you do in there all day anyhow?"

B
C In the eerie, oppressive serenity of a becalmed sea, the Captain quickly makes his way down to the the engine room.

If what the engineer had said is true, the explosion has caused damage so great that even in these still seas there is a chance that they are shipping water too quickly to repair the hull.

... --- ...

... --- ...

... --- ...

The dark water, rushing in and fi

      the iceberg, whose massive form had seemed so impassive at a dist

    in First Class, women weeping, men in tuxedos nervously remembering that tradition requires them to wa

Meanwhile, in steerage, young Tenacity Brown, the long-lost son of a wealthy Industrialist, who had unbeknownst to the orphanage slipped away to the docks only days before, begins to

                  the crew battling the rushing water, redoubling their heroic s

She
told
only
me
she
loves
me.
fable, invention, fiction, story, tale, NARRATIVE, tall story, fishy story, exaggeration, fairy tale, nursery rhyme, romance, tale, yarn, story, ABSURDITY, claptrap, gossip, guff, bull, rumor, myth, mythology, moonshine, nonsense, farce, hoax, humbug, flummery, EMPTY TALK,
She
only
told
me
she
loves
me.
C
D As the passengers gather in the rain, the crew struggles with the life rafts.

The pall of death has fallen over passengers and crew alike, the only sounds to be heard are the creak of ropes as the enormous wooden life rafts are released and lowered into the water below.

The dull thudding splash and the slackening of their restraining ropes are the only indication of their deployment in the black black night.

"If its a story,"

Harriet asked,

"shouldn't the people reading it be able to figure out what's going on?"

The valise, its clasp broken by rough treatment, disgorges its contents into the sea as it sinks, leaving only a handful of papers bobbing on the surface to mark its passage.

In the distance, the sound of helicopters is s

The Captain's lover stands on the burning deck, watches the orange flames and billows of steam and smoke issue forth from the hold.

All around, crew members are helping passengers into life boats.

"Does the lover have to go down with the ship as well?" he wonders.

D
E Harriet cradles the phone on her shoulder, wrestling with the sink.

"Oh, that sounds great. Lemme check my...Damn, I can't make it, an old friend is coming into town then."

"Oh, nobody."

"Oh, just a friend."

Only
she
told
me
she
loves
me.
Relieved at the estimates she has received from the engineer, the Captain stands on the foredeck, binoculars in hand. Confident that the passengers can all be afloat and far from the ship before it is in any danger of going down, she can now turn her attention to the problem of rescue.

As she surveys the sky, she gradually realizes that the helicopters which now only dot the horizon have not been dispatched by the Coast Guard.

The giant diesel turbine, idled in the explosion, leaking black oil onto the surface of the water filling the hold.
She
told
me
she
only
loves
me.
go to sea, follow the sea, join the navy, become a sailor, get one's sea legs, be in sail, sail before the mast, live on board, LIVE AFLOAT, go sailing, boat, yacht, cruise, launch, launch a ship, christen a ship, auspicate, E
F ship, vessel, boat, craft, watercraft, bark, barque, great ship, tall ship, little ship, cockleshell, bottom, keel, sail, tub, hull, hulk, prisonship, Argo, Golden Hind, Noah's Ark, steamer, screw steamer, steamship, steamboat, motor vessel, paddle steamer, paddle boat, stern-wheeler, riverboat, showboat, passenger ship, ocean liner, liner, luxury liner, cruise ship, ocean greyhound, FLOATING PALACE, ferry, hovercraft, hydrofoil, rotor ship, mail-boat, packet, steam packet, dredge, icebreaker, transport, floating hospital, HOSPITAL SHIP, storeship, tender, escort vessel, pilot vessel, tug, launch, lightship, weather ship, underwater craft, submarine, U-boat, WARSHIP, aircraft carrier, boat, skiff, foldboat, cockboat, lifeboat, ship's boat, tender, dinghy, pram, longboat, jolly boat, whaleboat, dory, pinnace, cutter, gig, bumboat, surf boat, barge, lighter, pontoon, ferry, ferryboat, canalboat, narrowboat, houseboat, towboat, tugboat, tug, sailing boat, sailboat, sailing ding! hy, yacht, catamaran, powerboat, motorboat, motor launch, PLEASURE-BOAT, cabin cruiser, speedboat, "Seascapes," she says.

"The ever-changing color fields of the primal elements of sea and sky," she says.

"The interplay of reflected and refracted light," she says.

So delicate a set of photographs requires a steady hand, long exposures, a stable camera, so every day she brings her tripod to the upper deck. Every day she braces the tripod, one leg on the deck, one on the rail, one on the bracket of the orange life rafts attached to the rail. Every day she screws the tripod firmly into place. Every day she rips a small gash in the skin of one of the orange life rafts with her sharpened screwdriver.

Everyday, she picks a different spot to take her photographs.

F
G The air fills with the hiss of inflating life rafts.

Under the equatorial sun's punishing glare, the passengers clamber down the ladders and into the bright orange boats.

In the hold.

The Captain surveying a scene of preternatural quiet.

Water swiftly rising into the engine room as the men, their movements m

The sun rises on a placid sea.

The sun rises on an empty sea.

I am writing this story for Harriet.

I wonder where she is tonight.

She
told
me
only
she
loves
me.
"This isn't a proper story at all!"

Harriet exclaims.

G

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